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RnM: Creature Feature Ch. 2

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(my point-of-view):

"Huh, the 'Makin' Bacon'..." the human girl mused. "That's an odd name, but unique, though." After a weird morning of meeting a new creature, I've decided to show young Maddy around the town of the Baconites.
"Yep," I nodded. "That's their specialty: bacon, bacon, and more bacon!"
"Wow, awesome!" Maddy gasped. "You get to eat just bacon for breakfast, lunch and dinner? Awesome!"
"See?" I reassured her. "We don't eat humans."
"YEE-HAH!" she cheered.
"Okay, okay," I moaned, covering my ear up. "Keep it down, will ya?!"
"Sorry," Maddy apologized. "I'm just so happy that I'm not gonna be eaten alive!"
"Just wish you'd be more collected about it..." I muttered under my breath.

As the strange human and I entered the restaurant, some of the customers began to stare and whisper, but Maddy didn't scream or freak out (thankfully), but when we approached Robot and Monster, they greeted us. "Oh, hi, Lizzie!" Monster waved.
"Uh, who's your friend, there?" Robot asked, giving us a bewildered look.
"Oh, fellas, this is Maddy." I introduced. "I just saved her from Crikey."
"Wait," Robot interrupted. "Crikey tried to hurt her?!"
"That's not like him, at all!" Monster added, giving a worried look.
"All the time I've known that guy," Robot moaned. "He's never had the guts to even hurt a girl!"
"Yeah, especially since he used to date J.D.!" Monster added again.
"Monster," J.D. snapped from the other side of the room. "I told you not to bring it up!"
"Sorry, J.D...." Monster whimpered, cowering down in his seat.

"Well, he didn't really hurt me..." Maddy explained in a shy manner. "I was just shocked, that's all..."
"Even so," Robot began. "You can't let your guard down when it comes to Crikey!"
"I thought he was going to help me get home," Maddy continued. "But... I don't see that I'll be getting home, at all..."
"Well, where do you live?" Monster asked, giving the human a big beaming smile. "We might help out."
"Thanks, but I don't think so..." the human girl replied. "This might sound crazy, and you might just send me to a mental home for this, but I think I'm in a different time, universe, or planet..."
"Uh..." Robot stammered.
"Look, I'm not from here;" Maddy explained. "I'm not an Organic, or a Mechanical... I'm a human."
"I can tell..." Robot replied, still looking at her with a bewildered look.
"Really???" Maddy asked, raising an eyebrow. "You know what I am?"
"No, no," Robot answered. "I know that you're not from here."
"Oh..." the human sighed in relief. "So, you're not gonna zap me with your laser eyes, then?"

"Laser eyes"? Are you kidding me?! That was the worst stereotype I've heard, all day! "What laser eyes?!" Robot then snapped; he even looked offended!
"I thought that robots had that kind of thing..." Maddy explained sheepishly.
"Mechanicals," Robot interjected. "And no, we don't..."
"Sorry..." the human girl apologized.
"Anyway," Monster piped up. "I think we can find a way to get you home."
"Really?" Maddy asked, perking up.
"Sure!" Monster answered, giving the beaming smile, again.
"Sweet!" she cheered. "How are we gonna do that?"

Just before Monster even began to speak, Crikey stepped into the restaurant, and walked past us without saying a word; Maddy looked a little frightened, and without warning, she jumped out of her seat and ran out the door!

(Ogo's point-of-view):

There I was, sitting in a tree in the park, when I suddenly heard a voice groan, "I can't do this!" I looked through the leaves, and there it was: a female creature, but she didn't look like an Organic, Mechanical, or even cyborg! The creature climbed up my tree, and sat down on one of the limbs; I got a little closer, and it seemed that she heard me! "Hello?" she asked.
"HELLO!" I replied abruptly, finally getting up close to the creature. She fell to the ground, but I decided to fly down and help her up. "Hi, my name's Ogo!" I greeted, shaking her hand. "You must be new, here! I've never seen you, before! What's your name? Welcome to the town!" I said all in one breath.
"Uh... thanks!" the creature gasped. "I'm Maddy."
"Maddy?" I asked. "Such a pretty name! "So, what brings you here?" I asked again, sitting next to her.
"Well, actually, I'm not sure why I'm here..." Maddy explained with a shrug. "But someone decided to bring me here, so here I am, all clueless and such."
"Who was that someone???" I asked. "A friend of yours?"
"The thing is, I don't even know who he or she was!" Maddy explained further. "Somebody shot me, so fast, all I could see was white, and now, I'm here. "If I'm ever getting home, I need to find out who brought me here." the creature continued. "But I don't even know what he or she looks like..."
"Oh dear..." I gasped, patting her on the back. "I'm sorry to hear that."
"It's cool." Maddy replied, standing up. "See you later, Ogo."

Right there, she started to leave, but I couldn't let her leave, yet! "Wait!" I gasped. "Why don't you hang out at my place? I don't usually have guests, but I'm happy to serve them!"
"Uh... I don't really know about that, Ogo...?" the girl stammered, backing away, slightly.
I had no choice but to pull my desperate routine on this one; "Aww come on... please?" I pleaded, getting on my knee and giving my best "pretty please" face. "Pretty please???"
"C-Can't we just stick with small talk, for now?" Maddy asked.
"Aww..." I moaned, now falling on my face; I didn't feel like giving up!
"Wow, dude, are you okay?" she asked, pulling me up.
"Please?" I begged. "I want you to come to my apartment; I want to get to know you, more!"
"I'd rather hang out;" she snapped, suddenly. "Besides, I'll be dead within a week, anyway, if I run into trouble, again! "Let's just hang out at the Makin' Bacon, for starters." she continued, calmly, this time. "I'll introduce you to my new friends; we'll hang out as buds there, how does that sound?"
"New friends?" I chuckled. "Oh, that's impossible; I practically know everyone in town, including Robot and Monster! You met them, yet?"
"Actually, yeah." Maddy nodded. "I was just there with Lizzie, talking to them."

"Lizzie?!" I snapped in anger; how could this new creature meet with the autistic friend-stealer, first?! "Oh, that dumb Aspie!" I growled. "Thinks she can steal Robot and Monster from me, huh?!"
"I, uh..." the creature stammered. "She seemed pretty nice to me, and she did save me from Crikey..."
"Hmph!" I scoffed. "I still don't like her... much."
"Well, it's your choice to stay or go." Maddy shrugged. "But I better go; it was nice talking to you, buddy!" With that, she finally left, but I was still concerned that she'd rather hang out with  Lizzie than with me. I better see to this...
Well, Maddy finally meets the three main characters of the show: Robot, Monster, and Ogo, respectively. Once Crikey enters the Makin' Bacon, Maddy runs out, but meets Ogo, on the way. In case you're wondering, half those words Ogo used to describe me are actual insults that have been referred to me, before! Anyway, hope you guys like it.

Robot, Monster, Ogo, J.D., and Crikey belong to: David Pressler :icondavepressler:

Maddy is: :icon013155:
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Dumb Aspie?!

Who does he think he is?